No one Cares

I'm tired of being alone

of having no one

I want to leave

This life

This world

I don't want to do what others tell me

I don't want to be their slave

I want someone to care

To tell me they're there

Someone who won't change me

I need someone

To understand

that I'm hurting

crying 

all alone

At the edge

I can''t handle it 

not anymore

No one wants to help

No one wants to notice the scars 

I've tried to improve 

I've tried to get help

but no one really looks

at the tears that are shed in the open

or the pain that I show in my eyes.

Reviews

[KeeD]

I hear ya' so many people feel this way, the trouble is even if we all get together to support each other that doesn't work.. I guess being alone is a way of life and it can only be fixed when the right kinda people come around.. hang in there and this was very expressive and filled with emotion good write.

[I Am Svetlana]

I feel that no one can understand us if we don't risk putting ourselves into the line of fire and exposing our inner emotions. It's nothing easy, but it must be done sometime in our lives. We can't trust everyone, but only those who are most patient, deserving and appreciative of it. Letting people know how we feel is such a difficult, yet powerful step for any of us...but it all takes time, perhaps it's best to pen it to paper until you can verbally say those certain words to people.

[CriticalxxAngel]

Those are some very true points and I gotta say that I completely agree with what you have to say

[Leslie Philibert]

A fine write, you write well for such a young poet, good job.

[CriticalxxAngel]

Thank you!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

:( well this is a sad poem....I can relate to some of the feelings, I think all of us can. I actually had an emotional melt down the other day xD not just because of some of these reasons but others adding up probably. Everyone reaches a point when they really need someone at that very moment, and when no one seems to be there that is what really drags us down. I sorry you feel this way and hope you cheer up, it is good that you write though that seems to help.

Good Job

[CriticalxxAngel]

Thank you that means a lot

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome, if you ever want to talk to someone you could message me I'm a good listener lol