Emotion Attack

 

I want to cry

I want to fight

I want to punch everything out of my sight

Listen to my heart pound

Feel my hands clentch

Wrap my fingers around their neck

I want to lash out

I want them to feel my pain

I need someone to help

Someone to stop

Stop my insanity

Get everything away

I push till I can push no further

They don't know

They don't care

I'm consumed with despair

 

Reviews

[Ranger Nadaly]

You have talent. But I want more ideas. Some of your writing is very similar to most modern poets. Become more independent with your writing.

[Bethany]

Simple but profound, and very emotional, which I like.
Great job! :)

[CriticalxxAngel]

Thank you very much!