Four Letter Word

To Fly High In Love

                                         E . . .

                           V

            O

 

L

One of the most powerful four letter words

How does one explain LOVE.  .   .   

When your soft gentle eyes lock with mine

My body melts at your touch

Heart beating faster than the rocket soaring in the sky

Gravity never felt so amazing when your body falls onto mine

The moment you take my breath away

When you whisper “I love you”

My ear drums exploding from the vibrations of your mouth

Every millimeter of my body begging to be washed by your fingertip

People say falling in love is the most beautiful thing

False,

Im flying higher and higher in love with you

Feeling stronger than all oceans combined

Why fall for someone when you make me feel like I am Mount Everest

Why search for ecstasy when you make my heart jump off mountains

 

 

Reviews

[The Ink Chapters]

I feel like Love is a very used topic; I like when there are twists and turns on things personally. However your writing style is excellent as well as is the way you describe your topic.
My suggestion is to pick something more original as you have amazing talent! Try and shock the reader, it will bring more interest.