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A Poem by Cristy

Darkness comes unannounced in my bedroom

Loves to visit when I’m alone

Fear thrives when Courage and Optimism have left for vacation

Doubts attack violently without a second thought

I’m trapped inside these four walls

They laugh and whisper when no one is around

In search for escape I look anywhere to go

But my own thoughts come back

Leaving no room but to face them head on

I scream at the person in the mirror

Why won’t it leave me alone!

Why is it laughing at my insecurities?

I think of ending her but then I realize that she is me

Hope that Tomorrow shows up soon

Darkness has stayed with me far too long

© 2017 Cristy


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Excellent, nice touch up of darkness....
Appreciated....
I saw a dream in it
A kid was crying from fear darkness .........parental need
A youth was crying from loniness of darkness.......social need
An aged is crying from silence of darkness....... Time need

When i snapped out of dream
Iam laughing at fate of darkness....... Caged by shackles of mortal world


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Excellent, nice touch up of darkness....
Appreciated....
I saw a dream in it
A kid was crying from fear darkness .........parental need
A youth was crying from loniness of darkness.......social need
An aged is crying from silence of darkness....... Time need

When i snapped out of dream
Iam laughing at fate of darkness....... Caged by shackles of mortal world


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Cristy
Cristy

Santa Ana, CA



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I am 23 years old. Math and Spanish major, on track to pursuing my teaching career and continuing to learn as I go. Love adventures with myself, partner and friends. Want to further explore my writing.. more..

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