Autumn Carol

Reviews

[David Lewis Paget]

I couldn't find neither sheep.... is a double negative. 'I could find neither sheep nor...' is the correct form, or 'I couldn't find either sheep or...'
Either/or, neither/nor is the rule.
David.

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Thank you very much !

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

I forgot to say, I cannot correct this picture here, I will correct it on my computer files.

[Dr. Wood ?]

there are some beautiful images here....David is right.....But you have a wonderful way with words...I wonder, do you need much time to compose such a piece...My work is far simpler and poems can take just minutes

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Thanks Dr. Wood, usually it takes much time, much longer for example than a short story like I wrote today. I am not a story teller but I tried my hand at it. Poems like this usually take about one hour if I am inspired, and then I revise them slowly in time.

[Skye]

Beautiful imagery, and beautifully written. :)