Passengers

a rhyme about our passage through life and beyond

All thinking, rebellious prints,

Like seals over arches and chains,

Will never be able to end

The breakup of star’s fire bridge.

 

A light gravitates within us

Dimming the hourglass eye,

Warm lightnings fall down over seas,

Welding our wings into white.

 

I tremble while letting my shadow

Hanging with grace onto snow,

In pain from a secret that burns deep

And passes from me to the sun.

Reviews

[Sam Gregory]

I second Skyes review, very beautiful

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Thanks it is a rhyme only with rhythm, without rhyming at the end of the lines, I read somewhere that some are calling this also a rhyme but maybe they are not right, maybe it has to have rhyme not only rhythm.

[Sam Gregory]

hmmm, it has rhythm but its not coz of rhyme

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Yes, I tried to count syllables and to be careful about accents, maybe it is not perfect, but it has rhythm.

[Sam Gregory]

Yeah its the syllable count that gave it rhythm. In rap I have to syllable count all the time to get it right

[Skye]

Your poems are so beautiful, I love to read them.