Summer Kiss

He took me by surprise with that warm summer kiss,

Hands tangled in my hair, sheer bliss.

Soft and supple, blistering heat,

Marked me as ripe, heart a’beat.

 

I kissed him back, not sure I should,

‘Though it crossed my mind that, yes, I could.

As his hand gently cupped my rosy cheek,

I wondered if by being passive I was being meek.

 

I brushed thoughts away as one flicks at a fly.

There was too much intrigue to go wondering why.

One arm slid manfully around my waist.

He bent me back for a kiss without haste.

 

My thermostat was loaded and starting to climb,

When reality intruded at just the right time.

I felt plundered, appreciated, still wanted more,

When suddenly there was a knock at the door.

 

Now my lips feel tender and my head’s spinning fast,

But oh how I wish that kiss could have last!

Reviews

[LonelySoul]

I'm getting a common message in your work...which leads me to surmise...
you are addicted to sudden out-bursts of kisses...
I've got a good health plan,might be able to help you with that...lol

[Lion of Judah]

Mmmmmm you know!! Love that feel

[Richard Brannigan]

While kissing, my hand tends to cup a different part of the female body, lol. Nevertheless, this poem is superbly scripted, and very accurate to both sexes, I should think.

[BluRaven aka Bootsy]

i loved it, it reminds me of a couple of times in middle skool lol.
but it truely is something i relate to, and i enjoyed reading it jus as much as i enjoy writing things like this

[That_Guy]

very nice, I enjoyed this

[Buniheart]

Wow!! Your words really pulled me in!

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Beautiful, sweet poem!! Really cute! Excellent job!