What's the matter

What's the matter

A Poem by CrissyG
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This is a 2nd poem i wrote on not yet being able to conceive

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Some time its hard to say what’s wrong

When you have everything

 

A couple try and try again to make themselves happy

With fake smiles on there face

They greet there family and friends

Like nothing is the matter

They go home to bed and look into each others eyes and cry

They ask each other

What’s the matter

Days, weeks, months, years go by

Nothing but tears and fake smiles

While there friends have a child or 2

They have none

They wish that one day they have all the matters but for now they ask

What’s the matter

 

© 2008 CrissyG


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it's so true it's heartbreaking. amazing job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Been there before.... Very sad, but I like the style of writing.
Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

Posted 16 Years Ago


I hope, for now, that writing helps. It has so often been a solace for me when I am down. I will keep you in my prayers, I too had trouble many years ago and then when we least expected it, it happened. Blessings to you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hello, my name is Cristina born on May of 1985.Since i was young i used to release alot of anger,sadness & happiness on paper. I have books and books of my writings & even poems. I will like to get my.. more..

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