Ocean of Ink

Ocean of Ink

A Poem by OctoberDawn
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A love poem

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I would swim the ocean to gaze into the sky 
Of stars that shine forever in the twinkling of her eye.
I would drown indeed but this death I do not fear,
For every hour that I live is folly without her near.

And in the sea so restless I lay within the midst,
The paper seagulls call me, the rocky cliffs demand a kiss...

I would dive the depths of the Mariana Ocean Trench
To drink deeply of her love and my brackish palate quench.
I would lay me down in the depths there below
and let the opaque ocean waters seize me, if she wished it so.

And in the sea so restless, I lay within the midst.
The paper seagulls call me, the rocky cliffs demand a kiss...

I would cast me over the very precipices' edge
Of the highest ocean cliff; the rockiest of ledge.
I would pierce my heart on the apical rocks below,
And in my dying moments my love for her she'd know.

And in the sea so restless, I lay within the midst.
The paper seagulls call me, the rocky cliffs demand a kiss...

© 2012 OctoberDawn


Author's Note

OctoberDawn
My first outright love poem without ulterior motives. It may be because it's summer, but I'm feeling sentimental.

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I love the two repeating lines in this one, it creates imphasism on the love being expressed here.

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Added on June 18, 2012
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Tags: Ocean, Sea, Ink, Ledge, Cliffs, Love, Devotion, Waters

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OctoberDawn
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My name is Criss Hill, I'm 20 and I'm from Colorado. I don't so much consciously write poetry as my heart takes control of my pen and urges me to capture a pale fragment of the beauty and heartbreak o.. more..

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