Winter Heart

Winter Heart

 

This black soul is pleading for help against the darkness inside. It cries and cries, but it can’t find its way out of its prison in time. It’s frozen with pleading voices ever carrying it to a place unknown to anyone. It lost forever wishing it could run away from the pain. But now it curses the existence it has been given, for the pain has consumed it.

 

Lost in a frozen wasteland I wish I could find a peaceful end to this existence of mine. If only I could see the pain inside of me. Then I could let it go and never worry about my soul. But this frozen wasteland of mine can’t seem to let me live my life.  

 

If only you would have stayed with me then this black soul could stop pleading. But it never ends that easily. Now I see that this soul shall forever cry in this frozen wasteland never seeing the love the sun brings. The pain I feel shall haunt you forever never ending its chase until you know my souls pain.

 

Lost in a frozen wasteland I wish I could find a peaceful end to this existence of mine. If only I could see the pain inside of me. Then I could let it go and never worry about my soul. But this frozen wasteland of mine can’t seem to let me live my life.  

Author's Note

This is my first try ever at trying to write song lyrics so if you have any pointers please tell me.

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Caleb, you write well. You have a head start over most your age with spelling and grammar (which is REALLY IMPORTANT if you want to get serious in the future). Nicely-written here, but outside of these cafe walls, I would suggest practicing writing "lyrics" in song format. They are easier to decipher that way.
Example: it's hard to determine your chorus line here, if it has one...but it doesn't have to have one.
Overall great job and talent.
Thanks for sharing!