Summer wings.

Thousand teasing kisses upon my blushing lips.

 

Opaque dusk emerges,
Sly, tender, and warm,
Ember within his skin enflamed,
Radiates the fall ridden walls.

Ember within his skin enflamed,
His passion glazes my lips,
Impressions of everlasting tremors,
They devour my innocent wit.

Ember within his skin enflamed,
My toes toil upon the ebb of sheets,
I take the dusk and summer within my palm,
And on his neck I moan with my fingertips.

Ember within his skin, now recede,
They recede into an ambience of moistening spring,
I move in circles and paint unfurled summer wings,
Fragile, vibrant, antiquarian wings,

Nerves of fire enclosed in their lightening streets,
We stroll in the summer wings,
Hand in hand, lips to lips, close to closest,
Ember beneath his skin,
Now kindle the summer wings,

Tumbling, falling, serenading colors of dusky wind.

Ember within his skin now replenish,
They soar, and shudder in my spirit.
We luxuriate in the wallowing needs of hearts,
Whilst dusk bathes in ashes on walls.

Author's Note

Hope you enjoy this little summer piece :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the use of the language. The good description made the words come alive.
"Ember within his skin, now recede,
They recede into an ambience of moistening spring,
I move in circles and paint unfurled summer wings,
Fragile, vibrant, antiquarian wings,"
The above lines are my favorite. Alive and beautiful. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[LastMonth]

This is a great piece.
Some words return too often, but perhaps that is on purpose.
In addition I'd put the photo of the butterfly at the ending of the piece rather then the start, I don't really have a proper reason for it other then a hunch.

One of my favorite lines here was 'Close to closests' I really like it. Somthing magical about it.

Good job.

[Crimson_ish]

Thank you so much! and yes it was intentionally, maybe I will try the picture at end trick with my next poem! I'm glad you enjoyed the magic in it! :)

[Inject Positivity]

Oh Kajal, how beautiful this is my dear poetess, your poetic skills emerging with every new piece of poetic art... How gloriously you are playing with words... This is such a beautiful work, you mixed with nature and love in a lovely way.... I was lost in the poem, there was warm innocent charm of love that flow like an ocean throughout the poem... The imagery is superb as it speaks to me dear frnd.... Love love love it....

[Crimson_ish]

Thank you for your charming and deep appreciation of my poem, Dhiman! :)

[barleygirl]

I like the imagery of "ember with his skin", but it's a bit too repetitious here for my liking, somewhat distracting & taking away from the rest of your artfully expressed message of sensual pleasure. I really do enjoy the unusual & original expressions of pleasure & delight. It's like a dance between nature's sensory aspects & human's carnal ones. Good job of expressing desire & pleasure with delicious subtlety.

[Crimson_ish]

Thank you for appreciating my little poem! I apologize for the repetition, I keep on trying new forms! Thank you for your perspective on it, I'll look after it next time! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

okay, i need a cigarette, after this one....wow...how sensual...but with such subtlety---

the imagery is astounding--i love your words...and am in awe of your talent,

j.

[Crimson_ish]

Thank you so much for a lovely review! :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

Whoa! I wish twenty years of age would visit me soon. I love your dalliances into poetic beauty. You are now and forever more on my reading list.

Regards,
Al

[Crimson_ish]

Hahah, that's really sweet of you! thank you so much! :)