Him.

A thousand kisses hidden by shivers.

My one finger tip smoothly moves, descending his earthy back, and he shivers and tightens under my skin. Gladly his lips contract, when I blow echoes of kisses upon his chest. The narrow spot between his neck and collar bone, that curve, when my mouth holds, he trembles and shivers under his skin, and when on his nose I leave a little peck, his eyes shiver with luster.

When we walk outside, and he's a step ahead of me, he turns around to steal a glance, and I can see him shiver, and when our foot entangles on a summer beach, I can see his broad shoulders shyly shiver as I lay my head placidly on him.

Every time we kiss and I hold his neck, every time we talk and I play with his hair, I can see a twitch of shiver flow through his veins, every time I kiss his forehead, and tease his ears, I feel a shiver pass from him into me.

Now when I think and look at those revolting shivers under his skin, I wonder, if shivers are just those lovely moments weaved in abstractions? Stored away secretly on the brim of our senses.

Author's Note

My first attempt at sensual writing.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Well, Kajal,
This may be your first attempt at expressing your sensuality in word, but no one could pen something as alluring, charming, and enthralling to the senses as this is without possessing it in your depths, and so much more stirs from whence it came.
In You, I sense a brilliant, primal fire, and this but a glowing ember thrust from its crackling spark!
The vivid imagery radiating out from the warming sensations of your words is enticing and seductive, creating almost an ache to be "Him" there with you in your moments … you make me want to shed my resolve.

Whew!
I could go on with what you've inspired, but I'd scorch the page … LOL!
I love well-written sensuality and erotica, and this is certainly wondrously, irresistibly done.
You should definitely get deeper into the sensual mode of expression … you've such passion and beauty within to compose brilliant pieces; I can feel it in my bones.

Thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully, Dear Lady-Poet …
now, to settle this dancing heart! ⁓ Richard

[Crimson_ish]

It's so difficult to resist coloring whilst I write a rudimentary thank you for such a poetic and endearing review!
"In You, I sense a brilliant, primal fire, and this but a glowing ember thrust from its crackling spark!" such a wondrous, inventive line! I fade into every syllable! Thank you so much for loving my little attempt at sensual piece, I wish I could speak more but at the moment I am carefully wrapped in lasting joy and flush.

Thank you so much for those lovely, tender supportive words, I wish to speak more but I am withdrawn into momentary enchantment!

there's so much that I love and cherish in this review! warmest hugs! :)

[Richard🖌]

Sheer pleasure best describes the sensations derived from sharing with you, Kajal … opportunity to "speak more" is ever with us, expressing, listening, sharing⁓*

[Inject Positivity]

aha!!! indeed sensual.... passion of two lovers... you always create an imaginative vision which gives the reader an opportunity to see and feel your words no matter what the topic is... as i was experiencing your whole thought here... it is full of sensuality... well done... full ratings... still my fav of yours is Horizon....

[Crimson_ish]

Haha Thank you:) I feel happy that somebody cherishes Horizon like I do :)

[Inject Positivity]

well i really do my frnd...