Writing For You

Groping for thoughts in the dark,

Newborn to the ways of this writing.

Not yet awake from my sleep,

Reading in this dim room lighting.

A struggle with the veins in my heart,

Thrumming with the music’s steady beat.

An ambience for my drugged mind,

Feeling the energy in my quiet seat.

Next time I’ll write it better.

I’ll force my brain to be unique.

The pages will be filled with wonderful words,

And the world will beg for a peek. 

Writing for you is harder than you think.

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

This poem is simply wonderful! The metaphors are clear, crisp and sweet imagery:
'Groping for thoughts in the dark,
newborn to the ways of this writing.' The rhyme scheme and stanza structure are simple, effective and perfect. The entire poem is picturesque in its imagery, word for word.
Each aspect of the poem complements each other from start, middle and end, with coherent rhythm and flow, making this poem depicted whole in concept, content and context (each poetic aspect in sync).

Here on Writers Cafe, I usually read and review as much as I can with an open mind to always appreciate other creative minds and hope to learn something fresh each time; and usually I only add poems to my Library that I consider as poetic gems that touch and move me for their inherent beauty of expression I'd gladly read again and again: yours here is one of those gems I am now gladly adding to my Library!

WELL DONE

[CrimsonHints]

Thank you so much for your comment! It means a lot to me.