giving up

HS freshmen yr.

My days are like a record, its broken so it
repetes, my days repete more than i can
count, its for me to recignize what the day
is, everyday is the same crap over and over
and over agian, i cant escape it, the record
never stops spinning, the days should turn
but they dont, im held captive in my own
mind, wanting to break free with out a
prayer, impossible, inconsivable, no hope,
no hope for my life to go on, but wait,
i see someone i thought i had lost, i then
had hope for my life, but not for the days
of my life, the days seem very hopless, an
uncertain future, the record is still
broken and still playing, but will soon be
stoped and replaced soon in this empty
life of uncertainty that consumes me...

Reviews

[barricade]

sad indeed...but a great write! keep it up! looking forward to reading more of your work...
regards
barricade...

[Jay Jay]

plz stop correcting my spelling plz!! i just copy and pasted my stuff. I havnt checked the spelling since i wrote it...it was a fast type.

[Owen]

The despair.. it burns...


(right-click to spell check ;)

[Markymark]

Jay Jay. You're pretty deep here. The ink causes a sad mood to come over me....is it supposed to? Did you mean to mis-spell or just forget to spell check? With your ability to look inward.....you've got to be an amazing poet. Can't wait to read more from you.

Good job,

Markymark

[Dante Balintyne]

Always remember sis, life is only what you make of it. Dont be afraid to take control and break free from the chains holding you down. You have a brave and beautiful soul and I know you have the strength. You just have to figure out how to use it. :)

[Ryan Heisel]

great write!

[Wildecat]

This is a painful write, but a good one.

[Jinx's Heart]

Wow! Such deep despair. The words seem light, but the tone is very prominent revealing a strong sense of insecurity and pain. A very real message. Well written.

*Check some spellings*

:)