abandoned

abandoned

A Poem by Jay Jay
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another one from my depression times, when i didnt think id get through it i would write.

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she lays on her cold floor and stares at the ceiling,
shes lifeless, not blinking, shes thinking,
she doesnt have the strength to get up,

Shes numb, cant feel her toes, her fingers, her face tingles,
Shes cold, her lips are white, can't feel the tears streaming down her face, they come naturally, She can't fight the tears let alone,


her life is complicated, and she is so unsure...
he confuses her, she doesnt know what he wants...
she wishes to be something more, not just a body in the corner...

Shes invisible, she might as well be dead to the world,
as ppl speed by her its as if time is running away from her...

her life is a mess, never been beautiful, never calm..
no balance, shes caught in a rain storm, shes dancing in it, forgeting her life for that 1 moment shes free,

her tears mixing with the rain,
How do you know shes crying...

when she crys in the rain you wont know..
know one knows..
shes an invisible mess with more tears then water in the ocean and shes dead...cold

© 2009 Jay Jay


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This is am emotional piece of writing, really touched my heart, nice write.

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Added on March 9, 2009

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Jay Jay
Jay Jay

Eastpointe, MI



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im Jen i havnt written in a while in the last year... i feel like i have lost my voice and that makes me sad. maybe my life has gotten happier and i have no need for sad poems so i have no inspirati.. more..

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