stole my soul

I was sitting in my psychology class and i came up with this.

Lost my soul and gave you my heart,
No hopes in getting them back,
You tossed them aside and threw them away,
I am soul less,
and with no hope i am heartless,
Fought like hell,
lost my grip, & lost all control,
Fought to move on but the darkness wont let me live,
to let go and be free,
your hearts full of love,
use to belong to me? no, I dont believe it did,
can't break an already broken heart,
Breathing in feels like knives,
breathing out, Losing my breath,
till my face turns blue,
and sees stars, feels like heaven,
Trying to escape from your grasp,
you hold me like a vice,
your invisible arms surround me like barbed wire,
Able to feel what is not there,
impossible faith in the love ive lost,
Look what you did,
u left me soul less, heartless, breathless,
i hope your damn proud,
i hope u have the chance to suffer as I have,
sealing my fate within my words,
i write in proof,
ur all i write about, every poem is your name spelled a hundred times,
need to crawl to my sanctuary and expire my thoughts,
and give in to the darkness within...

Author's Note

ignore grammer problems, im just copy and pasting from my myspace.

Reviews

[Jinx's Heart]

Such desperation and pain in this poem. Well expressed.