Within Green Eyes

Within Green Eyes

A Poem by Criator
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From the collection of “Bodily Observations”

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Brown speck in an iris,

A pill bug traversing a moss grown stone,

Jagged edges since stripped by downpour,

Moist vegetation molding to crustaceous feet

Marching towards a depression 

Of which pools with thick algae water.

© 2022 Criator


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Welcome to WC. Come on in "the waters' are fine"!

Behind our eyes... is whom we are. So few "see" or even understand ...us.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent! Very textural, i feel as if i transported to the forest and observed this microcosm. Good work, thank you

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Added on August 5, 2022
Last Updated on August 5, 2022
Tags: poem, poetry, criator, pill bug, moss, algae, gross, beautiful

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Criator
Criator

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Hello! My name is Criator and I write various kinds of stories ranging from short experimental stories to action, adventure novels to macabre or lighthearted poetry. more..

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