Mother

Mother

A Poem by Criator
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From the collection of “Bodily Observations”

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The egg sac of a Golden Orb Weaver

Is crafted from stained glass window panes

And blanketed in an amber quilt.


The hammock dangles from a barn truss,

Cradling a ball of two thousand legs 

Until they pour out of their brass shell


Like gunpowder.


They have never known mother,

Who hung that vacant portrait.

© 2022 Criator


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Hello Criator. Been leafing through your work, getting a feel for your sensibilities. have chosen to post my review here.
this is a very well-crafted, thoughtful piece. I assume it's about spiders, certainly, that's where my mind settled when considering the literal meaning. I really enjoyed the metaphors you have chosen to accent the story being told. the opening line "the egg sac of a Golden Orb Weaver" is unique, and evocative. as is the image of two thousand legs.
I be back to check again in the future I'm sure

Ken e

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Hello Criator. Been leafing through your work, getting a feel for your sensibilities. have chosen to post my review here.
this is a very well-crafted, thoughtful piece. I assume it's about spiders, certainly, that's where my mind settled when considering the literal meaning. I really enjoyed the metaphors you have chosen to accent the story being told. the opening line "the egg sac of a Golden Orb Weaver" is unique, and evocative. as is the image of two thousand legs.
I be back to check again in the future I'm sure

Ken e

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hello! My name is Criator and I write various kinds of stories ranging from short experimental stories to action, adventure novels to macabre or lighthearted poetry. more..

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