Dreaming

Dream a dream
A place beyond the sea
Lonely waves peak and sigh
Reflecting the moon
And all that goes by

The world is Quiet here
Transient butterflies soar
Through amber clouds
Over technicolor daisies
Whose vivid colors roar

True lights guide
To sweet oblivion
Dream a dream
Nothing lasts forever 
And things are not what they seem

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

Thing's aren't what they seem
and that sucks

Great work with this poem
I enjoyed reading it
thank you

Orlando M

[Adrian K. Smith]

Is life but a dream? All these moments that we would call reality, how real are they? We trudge along through the drudge, struggling from point a to point b - calling it life. Is there not more to it? Surely, there must be more to it.

We lay down, we close our eyes, we give ourselves over to our dreams...

...yet upon the coming of the dawn, what use have we for dreams?

Enough with all these escapades in the night as we slumber, life is short, lacking that essence of forever, much like a night's sleep. So yes, wake up - get out of bed - look around, take a deep breath, and dare to dream....

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Dreams are essential to finding what we find passionate about in life... and beautiful piece of writing full of insight.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Very good...i liked it alot... :)

[Kiara]

amazing!
I am sometimes too much of a dreamer
and I needed this:) your poetry is expressed incredibly
thank you for sharing
-arabella

[poetic soul]

dream a dream
nothing lasts forever..

amazing line out there, girl.. i really enjoyed the read.. simple, sweet and splendid.. :)

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[JadedSparrow]

"True lights guide
To sweet oblivion
Dream a dream
Nothing lasts forever
And things are not what they seem"

Fantastic is the first word that comes to mind. Absolutely fantastic. I dont really know what else to say.

[Wondering Mind]

How very true! " nothing lasts forever and things are not what they seem". Dream a little or dream a dream but, never lose touch with life.

[Raja]

Perfect Dream! Good Poem sounds like a song! Sweet words are occupying the whole poem making me feel I am in that dreamland.

Thank You.

Raja

[C.J.]

nice i have a poem about dreaming also but yours surpasses mine buy a whole lot.