My Homeskillet

She's my best friend. Break her heart, and I'll break your face.

Why, hello there

Sweetheart

       Lover Boy

             Cutie Pie

That's my girl

       you've got there

Make her cry

       ...you die

 

For you see,

Darling

        Schnookms

               Baby Cakes

I loved her first

       and a place in my heart

Will always be hers

 

She's waited so long for you

Dearest

         Pookie

                Honeybunch

So take care of her now

       if you don't want

To take your final bow

 

I prayed that she'd find you

Sugarcake

         Honey Bear

                  Diddykins

But treat her right

        that's my homeskillet

My bestie for life      

 

I loved her first.

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

Cute and light-hearted. Just wait until you have kids! I enjoyed this one:)

[Nathina Outright]

You know, that reminded me alot of..me! When my b.f get a new guy, it tell them, "You hurt her, I'll hurt you worse!" I've kicked a few butts because of my friends and i really love this poemm

[Rune---a Novel]

whoo, remind me not to break her heart, don't wanna get my face broken even if she is hot. You're a cutie pie too btw ;)

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

Made me smile. I enjoyed.

Cheers!

FF

[Creepy Swine Guy]

This sounds like something that I might write about my daughter. I've said on more than one occassion, "That's my baby girl, make her cry ... and I will make you cry!"

Very nicely shared. I hope that the recipient of this little poem gets the point.

[Adela Muresan]

Kowel :))

A.M.

[Wildecat]

Nothing like having a good friend, a wonderful poem, a pleasure to read.

[Emily Rose]

HA! What a great reminder. It's a wonderful testament to the power of friendship and how friendship is inherently different from romantic love. It's certainly great to know that even if your friend does get her heart broken, she's going to have a great support system to fall back on. Great idea! I really like the structure, too - it's intriguing, and I especially like your idea of listing the petnames and mixing them in with the subject matter. Bravo!

[Angel Baby]

Truly enjoyed your write, captivated me, nice flow.....thank you!

[PianoandPage]

i love all the pet names that give it a really nice flow and playful punch.