Collection for Tj...thoughts of him

At the very sight or sound of you I melt...

You walked into a room filled with darkness, and

I'd see the light of me in your eyes.

You could have walked in another dimension and I'd still have felt your touch.

The rush.

Such intimacy was our love and loving

Somehow you managed to awaken the heat in the core of me.

Which had been a solid block of ice inside of me.

Just the very thought of you made me melt.

The thought of you filled the very air around me, leaving me craving your touch.

And at the loss of you, I ache for you to love me.

My days have passed and my night have been haunted with empty dreams.

I learned quickly that even in those dreams that just the very thought of you.

could bring you to me.

So I sought you in our dreams.

Why is it that my heart is able to call out to yours in the darkness as we dream?

And you will cross over miles and conquer even sleep to come to me?

You are there.  But it's in my mind, that I can hear you.

I see your face and I can hear your voice.

And it comforts me.

I feel the luxury of that 'net' that only you could give me.

Your warmth surrounds me and the memory of your love enfolds me in a safe cocoon.

And I feel at peace.

You guard me at night as I sleep, and keep my demons far away.

The I feel you gently pull away as my night turns into day.

I get angry in the light, and I fight for the night.

I refuse to close my eyes, and battle the sleep that threatens to claim me.

Only because it's in the light of day can I be strong.

And have you gone.

 

 

Reviews

[Mark]

This puts a nice finishing touch on the conflict raging within you: you seek the memories, and the delectable feelings connected with them, but also fight sleep, as it is only when awake that you can keep him at bay. Quite a quandary, both wanting and fearing the memories...Very lovely write, Che.

[Rusty]

A fantastic write borrowed from my soul.

[ba_mcfarlane]

The delicate word construction of love lost is impressive. The openness of this write must have been cathartic. Bravo.

[khalid]

wow...what a poem! feelings of love and passion are flooding from every line. it really can make the breathe go deeper and sighs go out deeply...