Collection for Tj...Hello Love

Hello my love, I failed to hold you.

The memory of your lust filled touch,

Hits my system in a heated rush.

Then slams a power punch straight to my heart.

The love of ours was ill fated right from the start.

It was true that I'd love before,

and was loved in return.

But with open abandon in either case,

I'd been completely wrong until you came along.

 

Reviews

[Mark]

This chapter troubles me, as it sounds very like you are assuming blame for the failure of the relationship: "I failed", "Slams a power punch", "Ill-fated", "I'd been completely wrong ."

[Cree Nations]

Not sure now at the word choices....I'll tell you a story one day soon, and see what you hear and feel in my words.

[Mark]

I look forward to that day, Che. If you want to talk with greater privacy or at greater length than is apropos here, I will PM you my email.

[Cree Nations]

that will be great