I have a Mother

Tree huggers assemble the call to save our planet earth has gone unnoticed. I'd like to dedicate this piece in hope that all of us may stand together to save our home.

I HAVE A MOTHER. By Sangeetha

I have a Mother
The most loving Mother there could ever be
She gave her breath, her milk and her body to me

You have a Mother
The most caring Mother there could ever be
She gave her crop, her vines, and even her trees.

You'd play under her eyes above
And hide in her fields below
Remember how she rocked you to sleep
Under her shade though?

We have a Mother
The most hardworking Mother there could ever be
But she's been suffering silently, we can see.

Mother has children who betrayed her so
They hurt her Everyday from head to toe
They stole from her stomach, her gold.

They built structures where her flesh folds.
They stuck pipes where her veins should go
And poisoned what's left of her blood that flows.

Mother still cares for them with all her heart though
But her screams can be heard all the way home.
We want to help her, we really do
But there's nothing much for us to prove.

Theres nothing we can do alone
But together we are stronger than stone.
Our mothers name is earth and she's in danger.

Can you please help us save her?

Author's Note

This is another from the heart piece that I'd really like to share. This has been an issue that has bothered me for awhile and eco friendly movements are something I have a strong believe in. Hope this poem will touch your heart too.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

it did touch me... wish everyone reads this and feel what you feel... this is such a beautiful poem and a warning to us that the mother earth we are taking for granted is going to die very soon if we do not take a step forward to save her... she is in danger of disappearing, you really conveyed the message beautifully, skillfully and sweetly Sangeetha.... im so happy that there are people like you who care for our world, who just don't live life and take everything he/she gets from our earth for granted..... hats off to you.... im pleased to know your matured and wise thoughts again.... god bless you.... 100 ratings...

[Sangeetha]

Well I'm soo sorry this didn't touch your heat Mr IP but thanks for the wonderful review...and thanks again for thinking I'm mature and wise but I think I really like sticking to being a child once in awhile haha

[Sangeetha]

Oops wait I read did as didn't sorry my eyes goes bonkers sometimes

[Inject Positivity]

haha.... its alright.... no worries... you are welcome sweet frnd ...

[Inject Positivity]

well if a child's thoughts becomes this much thought provoking then i guess you should stay as a child....

[Sangeetha]

Hhha no wonder money always goes missing when I worked as cashier... Haha

[Sangeetha]

Ooh wooow I loved how you put it like that reallymeted my heart ...you know that reminds of that one song from the movie into the woods.

[Sangeetha]

Urrgh I meant to say really melted keyboards these days

[Inject Positivity]

yup yup yup!!! i understand haha.... the keyboard is innocent...

[Sangeetha]

Haha like many others here you sure have good sense of humour Mr IP

[Inject Positivity]

well you too got enough sense of humour my dear frnd.... as i have told you it is fun to talk to you....

[Sangeetha]

As its is with you Mr IP ...you know..after reading just 3!! Of your poems I really want to sing songs now haha not only that I'd like to make a tribute to your poetry for you and your love... But for copywright issues perhaps I can't

[Inject Positivity]

don't worry i don't mind if you take anything from here... it will be pleasure, you have my permission.... i guess you are in very happy mood...

[Sangeetha]

Ya I suppose I am

[Inject Positivity]

let me know when you write a song...

[Jess]

What a conversation you two! ;p ;p

[Sangeetha]

Haha ms Jess we are just having a little bit of fun

[Sangeetha]

But Mr dhi I could never write a song I'm not lyrical like you

[Jess]

;)Hhahah ;)

[Jess]

And Mr. IP gets lost every now and then ;p ;p

[Sangeetha]

Hey I sent you a Friend request did you see? And please take a look at my piece hollow I'd really appreciate your point of view on that poem as well

[Jess]

Yes I accepted it. Oh I just did.

[Jess]

It was very deep

[Sangeetha]

Thank you it was something that I did find that was an emotion I had to dig deep within me to find that I had even felt this way I Guess even you could be concealed from yourself .

[Inject Positivity]

awww great to see my sister here...

[Jess]

:) Yes you're right

[Inject Positivity]

well you are lyrical too sangeetha...

[Sangeetha]

Well my name wouldn't mean music if I wasn't lyrical I Guess haha

[Inject Positivity]

as sangeet means music...

[Sangeetha]

Yes it does how'd you Guess?

[Sangeetha]

Well to be more specific a Sangeetha is like a small ceremony before an Indian wedding were people just dance and sing

[Sangeetha]

A sangeet* I meant to say sorry ...keyboard...

[Jess]

Oh that seems soothing. Beautiful meaning.

[Inject Positivity]

yup i know that my dear frnd... well your words sounds sangeet too...

[Inject Positivity]

hey sis how you doing? good to see you... older photo?

[Sangeetha]

Aww you guys couldn't be sweeter

[Jess]

Hahaha ....yea :)

[Inject Positivity]

well it adds you too sangeetha... you are sweet too...

[Inject Positivity]

3 countries meeting here.... India-England-Singapore.... haha...

[Sangeetha]

Jess is from India?

[Inject Positivity]

nope England...

[Sangeetha]

Yeah everyone seems to be heare.. On the Singaporeans page how silly...haha

[Jess]

Yea haha
England but Pakistan too-sometimes

[Sangeetha]

Oooh cool..I've never been anywhere except for Malaysia and Hong kong.. Ive always wanted to see the world

[Inject Positivity]

Pakistan? ???

[Inject Positivity]

you got enough time to see the world my frnd...

[Jess]

Me too Sangeetha
Hey didn't you know...i thought you did.

[Sangeetha]

I guess I didn't read all of your profile haha

[Jess]

I've lived for a Very short while in the US. Now I live in England. But Pakistan-I've visited many times.

[Inject Positivity]

i didn't know that sis... oh my god i didn't know that....

[Sangeetha]

Wooow you've lived in the US I've always dream ed of going there..try a corndog

[Inject Positivity]

do you have anyone there?

[Jess]

Hahahaaha
Yea but tacos are my favorite ;p

[Jess]

Is this me you are asking?

[Inject Positivity]

yes jess..

[Jess]

Oh...yea my family lives there.

[Sangeetha]

Guys guys I know that we are the awesomest teio but before my poem explodes with all our talking why not we just exchange emails wouldn't that be easier ? Haha

[Jess]

Hahahha right we have like 55 replies here. poor comment section! ;p ;p

[Inject Positivity]

haha that will be perfect... but that will stop our 3way conversation...

[Inject Positivity]

oh my gosh! its so many....

[Sangeetha]

Not exactly

[Sangeetha]

If I have both your emails we can make this loop mailthing I know how to do it don't worry

[Sangeetha]

Thank you sir

[M P Ramesh]

sangeetha,
The mother earth is itself a poem. Any attempt to imbibe it for the purpose of aesthetic creation is also an art. good attempt
Carry on.
M P

[hcarson]

this is brillient and very clever! amazing poetry on such an open and honest thought that should make everyone that reads it think twice...lets hope...full marks!!

[Sangeetha]

Yaaay thanks ms H ..yes let's hope fingers crossed

[Sangeetha]

you know one thing that i do have to improve one is write a review as amazingly as you do hah

[hcarson]

honestly you wouldn't say that if you saw some of my reviews where i have no idea how to explain what i'm talking about haha, thank you for the lovely compliment anyway tho :)

[Sangeetha]

I think we are both in the same boat here ms Helen haha

[hcarson]

it happens to everyone...i hope lol...we all have those days where our brain goes awol and refuses to make sense of things dont they lol??

[Sangeetha]

I know right ?.. Urge so frustrating like the words never come out when you need them ...kind of like on those days when your rushing to go out and you know what outfit you want to wear but you can never find it...than you come home and turns out it was behind the door all along...haha

[hcarson]

aha now the clothes story is the story of my daughters life!! my mind just goes blank randomly..its ridiculous..when its unneeded i got all these great things to say then when i'm in a situation to use them i come out with...eerrr sausages....or some other stupidity haha...blame it on nerves ;)

[Sangeetha]

Yes! Yes! Yes! I Guess you could say the rambling train just stopped on the wrong station on at the wrong time all the time haha ...see what I did there😂😂

[hcarson]

lol you got that right...as they said years ago...when god offered me a brain i thought he said train and asked for a slow one lol :)

[Sangeetha]

Hahaha oh what a great joke.. Speaking of jokes I just wrote a short story go check it out this ones a happy one I promise haha

[hcarson]

i will do whats it called or is the one you are featuring?

[Jess]

:') this was so touching...beautiful

''Mother still cares for them with all her heart though
But her screams can be heard all the way home. ''-this line is amazing.

lovely emotions

[Sangeetha]

Thank you so much for your review ms Jess I can honestly say I've always wanted one of my prices to be quoted ...it tells me how much you really enjoyed it...I feel like the soul of my poem is really coming alive haha

[Inject Positivity]

we should try this comment feed lol.... its young still... only one comment....

[Jess]

Hahahah no way....give her your email address ;p ;p

[Inject Positivity]

i mailed her...

[Sangeetha]

wooow planning to spam here too eh? ...very funny Dhi going after my comment feeds has become a new hobby of yours has it ? haha.