Live in Vain (Poem inspired by a quote by Emily Dickinson.)

I have been told to not live in vain,

To save one's heart or,

Let it rain.

Reviews

[Abilash Uttama]

well i have never read a three verse poem before. it's unique, creative and at the same time amazing.it's awesome.

[Confuser]

Very clever; I actually tried to do this contest; and haven't nearly finished. Look at what you did. Wow.

[David Gabar]

Very unique. You write really well keep up the creativity.

[Mayank]

oh the choices are always difficult, maybe we should sip some wine when it's raining outside.

[DoormanDan]

I don't think I've ever seen a three verse poem before, which definitely makes this unique. It's short, but still every bit as good as your usual writing. I loved it!

[Kyline Freed]

Thanks! I actually wrote this for a contest and meant for it to be longer then 3 lines but i didn't want to get off topic accidentally :P

[DoormanDan]

Yeah, I understand that feeling. It's easy to get off topic at times. You definitely should enter this into a contest!

[Kyline Freed]

i entered it into a Peotry 101 contest

[Kyline Freed]

*poetry lol