Remember

How is it that I can remember the voice,
But not the words,
Remember the face,
But not the person.
Remember their fate,
But not their time.....

Reviews

[closed]

this is like an open thought

maybe a musing on someone you've forgotten?

very poetic

[Daisygirl]

Great contrast! Memories are so complicated.

[Kyline Freed]

Thanks for the review Daisygirl!! Ill try and find time to read something of yours

[Lizardo]

Wisdom in this words, I really love this poem and for your young aged, wow, This is truely amazing
Greaw work!

[Confuser]

13 Wow, what a world of knowledge in front of you and the truly profound words you write. It is amazing to me. Thank you.

[Alaa Abdelrazig]

The last two lines are especially intriguing, they leave me immersed in thought about the meaning. Really Liked it!

[Konigin]

Love the idea. The wording drew me in. Loved it. :)

[Mayank]

it's hard hitting disease I suffer from, can't stop being me.... lovely poem

[Miles W.]

A very interesting take on how memories change with time and we don't always remember what was before. Well done!

[Kyline Freed]

Thanks for the review!

[Alexis]

this is pretty good i like the pattern you folllowed

[DoormanDan]

This is a short but well written poem you have here. I feel like I can relate to this somewhat. When i moved to a new place and met new people, they told me their names, but later on i just couldnt remember their names for the life of me( but i could remember their faces perfectly). Good job!

[Kyline Freed]

Thanks! Will try and find time to read something of yours.