I Was There

You sang,

I was your song.

You wept,

I was your shoulder.

You tripped,

I picked you back up.

But when you died,

I cried.

Reviews

[wordsofheart]

That poem just made me perplexed for a few seconds.It's so wonderful.This writing is one of the best examples to show that just a few words can hold so much of depth and meaning.Absolutely amazing! Well Done!

[SmittyJas]

Good Rating for this one like the meaning

[SmittyJas]

Bewildered as she cried over my dying and she will never hear my lovely voice calling her name in the morning again. Gone like the wind.

[Mayank]

The brevity is justified, in few lines you said a lot.

[Moonlight]

You have so beautifully depicted the sadness in this poem! I loved its simplicity and the message it conveyed... Thanks a lot for sharing! :)

[Lizardo]

short and again sad.
Your writing has a lot of paing behing it, but it is really enjoyable to read becuase it is the truth.
Thanks for sharing this good poem!

[Miles W.]

An interesting take on life and relationships and love. Well written poem, good pace. Well done Ma'm!

[Cool Girl]

It made me want to cry! Good job!

[Kyline Freed]

Thanks for the review I'll try to return the favor soon!

[Cool Girl]

Your Welcome, and Thanks

[jennifer little]

good write i liked it . keep up the good work

[Angad Waraich]

Short and Crisp.
You managed to capture a majority of what people experience when in love.
Interesting read.

Thank you for sharing.
-Angad