I tried

I left you alone so you could grow
Tampered with your senses so you could miss me
I drenched myself in your over flowing cascading love
Soaked
I drowned
Mouthful I gulped
But your sea of love never ran dry
You laughed at me in pity
As I struggled with the notion of you leaving
So my affection for you turned to self pity
Burrowing through my own mind
My love escaped through porous membranes
Dehydrating my will to live
So I tried to drink from the stench of the world
But my stomach grew tired and distended
And brought me pain and diarrhea

What’s the point I ask myself
To leave you alone
But why should I leave you alone
When I love you so much
I’m leaping through worlds
And galaxies, into solar systems
My feet barely touching the ground
Floating through your sphere of love
Why can’t you let me go?
Float away, suspended in fruitless worlds
Suffocated by the lack of your love
Or is it oxygen?
The difference doesn’t matter anymore
Coz you are my air
You are my every breath

Twinkling lights pierce my retina
And in my blindness
You engulf me in your luminous aura
The light of love
I rest in your sensual grail
A place of peace
I will die in you
So I can become one with you
Your growth is my life
My love is your life
Our union is perpetual divinity
And to walk alone devastates life’s fabric
So come back to me
I never meant you to leave
I died when you left
Come resuscitate me with your lively bolts of love
We are the earth, the moon, the stars
You are the universe
I breathe life from your womb
I am born in your cradle of existence

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

honest and telling write Creatif...nice pace with terrific use of metaphors....I've read some other works you've written (I'll respond to them later) and one thing I notice with every write is your innate ability to send a message with you final sentences. Even in this one it's as if you have written 3 distinct poems. The stanzas tied together neatly with the ability to stand on their own. I like that and enjoyed this write.
allen

[Créatif Word]

Thanks Allen for taking the time to read my work, i greatly appreciate it.