Ouch!

You walk away from me

Leaving me breathless and yearning for more

I lay bare and vulnerable

Your touch has paralyzed me

Your kisses have left me speechless

The scent, a jasmine garden

Rose petals falling from heaven

Satin, silk suffocates my will to live

For you I will die

For you I will fly

Buoyant, naked, the throbbing of my being

Come back to me my love

Fill my spirit with your lingering lust

Reviews

[NebraskaHope]

Poetry poem was great ! It was soft and very much did it flow !

[Créatif Word]

Thanks Hope, much appreciate your comment.

[Créatif Word]

Thanks TLK for the review.

[TLK]

I'm not sure how these lines are connected -- the imagery of the garden doesn't easily tie into anything else.