MAGIC

Momentary visions
Ascending thoughts
Gripping the senses
Invoking the spirit
Chills me!

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

Magic not an attribute of the Savior but a craft of Satan so I am confused as to the idea of the poem. It's the title and line Ascending thoughts that has me wondering is this going towards God or away from him? Please excuse my candor as I know it is something of a rarity among this site.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and comment.

[Michael G. Smith]

Lol, I hoping for some insight on your write.

[-Scribe in Style-]

Magic as a miracle? Or a traveling zone? One of the two.
The short phrases you have used are effective.
Arwa

[Anand Sehgal]

you reminded me of my own "etcetera" series :) will resume soon. Loved to see somebody on the same page myself :)
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[Blood Ink Diary]

In these few lines - you have conveyed multitude possibilities in emotion. What a lovely verse ! Cheers, Praveeta.

[Praveeta]

Thanks a lot for your time and review Shaheen.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is a really wonderful poem! :]

[Praveeta]

Thank you for the lovely comment.

[New Theory]

Good one, or should I say, Magical.. :)

Please can you review some of my work.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for reading my poem.

[New Theory]

You are welcome and can you do me a favor.. can you please tell me what is the meaning of your name??

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Short but very interesting. It's so thought provoking and awesome how you say so much in so little words. Thank you for sharing!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and review.

[Blue]

Ohh, I like this one. So short but so loaded with meaning. The last line painted a smile on my lips. :)

[Praveeta]

Thank you Arzel. I am glad you liked it.

[LadyAnn68]

IDK...I rather like it....it does not chill me I like them!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and feedback.

[paras]

you've described the suspense and mystical royalty of magic here ..!! great work:)

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your time and feedback.