Obeisances to God

Obeisances to God

A Poem by Praveeta

When things were falling apart
When things were beyond my control
And I was helpless
You intervened

You showed me the light
You gave me the courage
To withstand any obstacles
That came my way

Thank you God
For your guidance and support
For without your help
I would not be the person
I am today

© 2014 Praveeta


Author's Note

Praveeta
Just when I was thinking what to pen today, thoughts of our creator flooded my mind.

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Such a beautiful prayer1 AWESOME! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the wonderful comment.
I enjoyed it. I think it's your best so far, or at least it's my favorite.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the lovely feedback.
Robert Strzalko

10 Years Ago

You're welcome.
P this is not only poem but a decent prayer, good work

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and comment.
Written by a true believer. This is a very lovely poem :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the lovely feedback.
I would not be the person
I am today

written, true message to the core, realization of this simple truth itself will lead us a long way positively, enjoyed

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your time and review. I appreciate it.
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

You most welcome, take care
Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thank you.

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