Obeisances to God

When things were falling apart
When things were beyond my control
And I was helpless
You intervened

You showed me the light
You gave me the courage
To withstand any obstacles
That came my way

Thank you God
For your guidance and support
For without your help
I would not be the person
I am today

Author's Note

Just when I was thinking what to pen today, thoughts of our creator flooded my mind.

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

It is lovely when we feel God loves us.

[Praveeta]

Yes, it sure is. Thanks a lot for reading my piece.

[paras]

great work .!! people mostly ask god rarely they do thank him for what they are now :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for the lovely feedback.

[Ahena MK]

wonderfully said !!! really good ....
And I was helpless
You intervened
very very good !!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the read and lovely comment. I am glad you liked it.

[Vaishali Roopesh]

Humble and sweet. I love poems that are down to earth like these :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for the lovely comment. I am glad you loved it.

[Mary Christabel George]

Simple & beautiful. A prayer in itself.

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for the beautiful comment.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

A nice, simple, and thankful prayer. We should always pray, not only when it's raining but when it's sunny, too.

[Praveeta]

So true Michael. Thanks for your lovely words.

[Moon]

We have such little control over our lives, unlike the Divine. So, sometimes we must turn to them and have faith. Lovely prayer to your Lord Praveeta. May he guide and protect you.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the lovely feedback.

[Moon]

You are very welcome :)

[Frieda P]

A sweet prayer Praveeta, nicely pen'd my friend.

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much lovely friend.

[Avinash]

The poem is an ode to almighty..simple and truthful.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the read and review.

[Vidya Bacchus]

With God all things are possible .The only constant in an ever changing world .A most inspirational poem my friend :)

[Praveeta]

Thank you so much for the read and review dear friend.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)