Summer Blessing
A Poem by Praveeta
Rain pelts in summer
The dams cannot handle
Roots drink in solace
© 2014 Praveeta
Author's Note
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Heavy downpour since yesterday. Inspired by mother nature.
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Rain has made us inconvenient to move around, while in the nature, rain is just like a blessing to all lives, which is shown very beautifully by the words 'roots drink in solace'. Brief yet all these simple words had reflected exactly what mother nature has given us. Very beautiful poem, Praveeta! :)
Kami
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thanks for the lovely review.
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10 Years Ago
Thanks for your time and review. I am glad you liked the haiku.
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Thanks for reading and reviewing my piece.
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Thank you for your time and lovely review.
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Thanks for reading my piece and for the lovely review.
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Thank you for the read and cute review.
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10 Years Ago
Yes, it was a blessing and I enjoyed every moment while being outside. Thanks a lot for your invalua.. read moreYes, it was a blessing and I enjoyed every moment while being outside. Thanks a lot for your invaluable time and review.
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Thanks for your time and comment.
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10 Years Ago
Thanks for your invaluable time and lovely review, dear friend.
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You are always welcome,dear friend.:)
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10 Years Ago
Thanks for awesome review.
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Thank you for the lovely review.
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You're very welcome :)
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Added on January 23, 2014
Last Updated on January 23, 2014
Tags: Summer, rain, drink, solace
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The Magic Faraway Tree has been my favourite book and I remember how I missed school for a day to be truly immersed in the imaginary world that Enid Blyton had beautifully created.
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