I do

I do

Dressed in white gown
Embellished with sequins
She walks down the aisle

Bouquet in her hand
She reaches the groom
Her appearance like a goddess

Union of two souls
Is witnessed at the altar
In cosmic presence

Author's Note

A poem for my best friend. Looking forward to your wedding.

Reviews

[F.Gentil]

I once had a vision, not seeing in a dream, but basically an hallucination in which I married myself. Quite strange I must say, but unearthly beautiful. This poem reminds me of that. It takes me to the spiritual realm where what I perceived as reality was magnificent and divine. I could feel the cosmos auras around my body, for in it I was an embodiment of God. I was a part of that cosmos. It makes me wonder if when two souls get married in our world, if this embodiment is the true emotional state felt.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and insightful review. I highly appreciate it.

[Blue]

Wedding is always worth of great celebration! It's a miracle. Two souls, united, sanctified by marriage. Looking forward to my time to say "I do"... ;)

Nice poem, Praveeta. I love the last stanza.

[David Scott]

It really is this simple and this "cosmic". Now, every moment of every day when the questions arise the answer must be, "I do"...
Very well done.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the amazing review.

[Julie Spade]

Profound and a delightful read! I envisioned so many different aspects of myself walking down the aisle which is scary since I am 16 but I do appreciate the passion and care you have for your friends wedding, I hope she'll like this just as much as I did !

[Praveeta]

Thank you for the lovely review.

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

This is such a beautiful piece. I am sure your best friend adores it! Excellent job

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much Jordan. I am glad you liked it. My friend loved it.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfect, sweet and emotional, well done and have a great time!

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for your invaluable time and review.

[Sue Hart]

That's a very nice gift. A poem for the bride. One to put in her wedding book and look at years from now.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and lovely review.

[zainul]

Celebrating a new journey of a pair of beloved persons.
Wish their journey is filled with pleasure and prosperity.

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for your time and blessing.

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear friend.:)

[Praveeta]

Thank you :)

[Ency Bearis]

A good notion about wedding and poetized, great piece.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your valuable time and magnificent review.

[Avinash]

Fairy Tale Revisited, Visual imagery took us to the wedding without any Invitation :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the inspiring review.