Fiery ball

Soaring summer heat

Sweat dribbling down forehead

Blood hits boiling point

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I would be glad to see the sun. Here in Michigan maybe 11 inches of snow. I prefer cold over heat. Can't escape the heat. Warm clothing keep you safe from the cold. Very good use of words. Create a good vision with the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your lovely feedback.

[SAYED THANGAL]

this haiku is the essence of the real romantic passion, my mind goes in such a route, some times you may dis agree ,
sayed

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and review.

[prodicallife]

hahahahahahah!!

Dear Praveeta,

That is not a poetry, :P

That is a condition. HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Alright, May God bless you with some relief from the soaring Sun.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[Praveeta]

Hi,

Thanks for your comment. This is a haiku with 5-7-5 syllable pattern.

[prodicallife]

Yeah! you are right.

I have read about that.

Thanks for updating again!read moreYeah! you are right.

I have read about that.

Thanks for updating again!

Regards
Prodical

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sun sun glorious sun.Indeed Praveeta well written much enjoyed:)

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your time and review. I appreciate it.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Short, simple and perfect, a telling piece.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for the lovely feedback.

[radio raven]

Yep sounds like Australia right now, so I can relate to this.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and comment.

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Very good, but I want more, more...Tell the way it burns but energizes at the same time...The way it makes you want to pass out and at the same time spurs you to action. It gives life that keeps you going all through the hot night...I need MORE!!!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and review. I will leave the rest to your imagination.

[paras]

well environment does brings mood swings.!! much explained in a few lines

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and comment.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

well...the heat is unbearable at times!!!!!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for reading my piece.

[Anand Sehgal]

yeah.. typical summer that unsettles us. The great heat wave is gruesome in some parts indeed !
Have you started dreaming already ! :P

[Praveeta]

Thank God heat wave is over:)