Time - A Priceless Commodity

Time - A Priceless Commodity

Time is ticking
So much to learn
So much to share
So much to achieve

Reviews

[Catherine Frain]

This poem is a good one, and it so very true. In the small limit of time, we as a human being, are allotted- we have so many things to do. We must learn from the things we do and see, share the lessons that we have learned. We have to achieve so many things- whether major or minor. This poem is an excellent view point on this.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your insightful review. I highly appreciate it.

[Victoria Kaer]

Short and to the point. And all of it absolutely true. We have very little time on this Earth to share with others, we need to use it wisely.

[Praveeta]

So true. Thanks for reading my poem.

[Anand Sehgal]

Time is invaluable and it stays. We evaporate soon enough ! :)

[Praveeta]

So true. Thanks for your time and comment.

[Dhruv Yonzon]

haha.... loved it!!! sweet, short buy deep!!!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the read and review.

[Sue Hart]

And the older you get the faster that timepiece ticks.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and comment.

[Ahena MK]

I just love the way you write the tiny little cute things....
Ahena :)

[Ahena MK]

They are great story starters
Ahena

[Praveeta]

Thank you Ahena.

[Bri]

Explains life perfectly and the essence of time.
Well done, friend.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your time and review.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Interesting ... when time is limitless, you have witten a short poem e4ncompassing it all ..3well done!

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your comment.

[Arialti]

This is one of my favourites! :)

[Praveeta]

I am glad you liked it.

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

Short, simple, yet Philosophical, good write :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and review. I appreciate it.

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

Your Welcome. :) keep writing.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for the inspiration. :)

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

I inspired this? I am flattered.

[Praveeta]

As in keep writing :)

[SAYED THANGAL]

very good, it was better not to mention ''time'' in the starting, in order to keep the mysticism .
sayed

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your review and suggestion.

[SAYED THANGAL]

my ''unseen controller'' is also about time.