The Chosen One

The Chosen One

Splurging emotions surround him
Enough to last a lifetime
Yet his eyes wander
With a glimpse of her

Fiery eyes set on her
Angered by his diversion
His fixation on her to them unexplainable
The innocent suffers in silence

Reviews

[Vaishali Roopesh]

Oh SUCH a beautiful piece! It was, I admit, quite difficult to comprehend the first time I read it, but when I read it again... I love what the poem is trying to say. Truly amazing poetry. Cheers x

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for the lovely review. I appreciate it.

[Mary Christabel George]

"The innocent suffers in silence " such a beautiful line...
Loved it.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your time and review. I appreciate it.

[Sue Hart]

An excellent write full of truth and emotion. Very nicely done.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your lovely review. I appreciate your time and review.

[sharonlee]

How sadly true... that the innocence so often afraid of retaliation, suffer in silence.

Emotive piece.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your lovely feedback.

[ZeniaK]

I love that he is the "chosen one" and not supposed to let anything distract him, but this one girl is someone he can't get out of his mind. I loved the topic of this poem and the way it was written.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your lovely review.

[The Chosen Poet]

This read made me smile, actually lightened up my day BEAUTIFUL !!

Sean

[Praveeta]

Thank you so much for your inspiring review. Have a great day!

[SAYED THANGAL]

this writing is similar as looking with side ways, sure it's with the intense feeling towards the partner, it's pity to chase the new by a one who has already engaged, in my poem, 'what's love ?'', I have stated it,
sayed

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your review.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well this one makes me wonder.Is he in love with her and not quite sure ,and are people wondering what he sees in her.Either or, I as usual like your writings.They are deep and make me think:)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your invaluable feedback. I highly appreciate your review. Your interpretation is correct :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The verse seems to be incomplete in a way...may be your attempt at thew reader to figure out the rest for themselves in the write...I'd clarify the second stanza a bit to give more balance:

Fiery eyes set on her
Angered by his diversion
His fixation on her to them unexplainable
The innocent suffers in silence
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Fiery eyes set on her
Angered by diversion
Fixation on her unexplainable
Innocent suffers in silence

IMPO of course...this is your work...

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your feedback. You are right. I wanted to leave the poem open to interpretation.