Chapter 11A Chapter by The Creative DisasterChapter XI Patrick
woke up, clutching the hay mattress with one hand and gripping his arm with the
other, his nails digging deep into it, just like the farmer in his nightmare
had to the table. He looked around the room, but it was just as deserted as
when he came here. ‘I’m
going to go insane if I keep having these nightmares,’ he thought. Suddenly, a
shard of light burst into the room from the sole window. The pale light of dawn
hit his eyes and made him emerge from the confines of his bed, which had become
hard as a marble slab unlike in his nightmare. The terror-stricken boy groggily
walked towards the cupboard where the food was stored and extracted half of the
dry fruit in an airtight jar along with a few of what little potatoes had
escaped mold and fungus. They were still covered in little clods of dirt and were
covered in dust, but were otherwise unharmed. Patrick then took an empty burlap
sack and put the potatoes in it along with the fruit. He would eat them while
walking, as he had no desire to stay here. As
he left, he stopped at the entrance and gazed from atop the hill. Now that it
was morning, and he was alone and in no immediate danger, he didn’t quite know
what to do. It was always running away from danger which had gotten him first
to the Arico’s house, then to the deserted farmhouse. He obviously wanted to
find Beatrice and save Samuel, but he had no idea of how he was to set about on
that. ‘Review the facts, Patrick, review the facts,’ he thought to himself.
‘How could he find Beatrice? She disappeared when I was asleep and for all I
know she could be dead! I have to go to the church to be sure. If she isn’t
dead, maybe someone can give me a clue to where she is, but if she is…’ he had
no intention of continuing the thought, but then his mind thought shoved a
thought to the top of his conscience, ‘then I’ll avenge her death by saving
Samuel and making sure every last of those horrible Grenadores are as miserable
as I would be or die trying.’ That was a fitting thing to do, and he liked it
as much as he liked his plan. Filled
with renewed determination, he set off quickly towards the town and then to a
gap between the crooked wall of houses separating him from the white church. He
was going to save Samuel, he was going to find Beatrice, and he was going to
get to the bottom of whatever his inheritance was. Minutes
later, he arrived at the east edge of the city. The church was to the northwest,
and he could already make out the pure white needle point top with its bell
dangling by it from amidst the array of houses. Soon he arrived at its door,
having found a narrow side road he hadn’t seen before in his haste leading
between two houses. The wide doors were open revealing the spacious interior.
The daily service had just ended, and streams of people were pouring out from
the exits. Squeezing his way in and walking between the pews in search of the priest,
he suddenly realized how and ragged his garments had become. His brown old
shirt was now torn in several places from taking a shortcut through the rose
bushes, and his shorts were in no better condition. When the last of the people
left, he stood up from a corner he had found himself in and reverently
approached the priest standing at the altar, busying himself with cleaning a
small wine stain which had fallen on the tablecloth during the service. The priest
looked up from his work as Patrick reached his destination. “Hello,
my son. What is it that you want on this fine day?” The
tone of his voice made Patrick rethink his wording, as he seemed kinder than he
expected. “Um, I just wanted to know if, um, there were any people for whom a
funeral was held yesterday.” He paused, then added, “It’s really important that
I know.” The
priest’s voice lowered a notch, but still retained that same tone. “I don’t
think you’re from here, young man, because here the people don’t tend to speak
about funerals and deaths, as they are not the lightest matter to touch on.
Furthermore, many times the family asks me not to disclose the identity of the
buried to a stranger.” “I
am her family! I need to know if a girl by the name of Beatrice who is around
thirteen was buried here. I need to know if my sister is still alive and well
or lying in a casket underground!” For
a horrible moment, Patrick thought he was going to respond in the affirmative.
Then, he heard the priest speak. “There there, my little one. Don’t fret. No
one has been buried here, save for an elderly man,” he motioned outside to a
patch of freshly upturned soil lined with flowers from mourners, “who I cannot
disclose the identity of.” Patrick
shivered, yes shivered, at the sudden rush of relief that accosted him. He
lowered his head to the priest before saying, “Thank you, because you have
assured me my sister is alive. However, I have just one question: do you know
anything about the girl I have previously described?” He was going to say her
full name, but he worried that the priest might turn on them like the farmer
and Mr. Arico did, however much kindness he displayed towards him. “I
am afraid I don’t know anything. What is her name, to be sure? Maybe I can
point you to some of my acquaintances who are more knowledgeable of the people
around here, of course though I do not consider myself a hermit.” Patrick
panicked inside of himself. For a moment he stood stunned, but then responded,
“Beatrice Longflower.” That was a good cover. The Longflowers were numerous,
and the last name was well known. Almost everyone knew a Longflower. Which
was why he was astonished when the priest looked at him and casually said,
“You’re lying.” “How
can you be so sure?” “Most
of the Longflowers have relocated a couple of years past to Sherberry, and
those that stayed are richer than most. Furthermore, your hands are shaking,
your tone is indecisive, and you couldn’t look me in the eye while telling me
this, although that has not been the case in our conversation prior to this.
Lying,” his voice became lower once again, “Is a sin, and a very stupid one
too.” Yet again Patrick was stunned. The Priest was skilled at
detecting lies. He must become more believable for the times he needed it,
however he felt a pang of guilt for the times he had lied. He really needed to
work on cutting back the amount of lies he told, unless they were absolutely
necessary. When Patrick spoke, he spoke slowly and with direct eye
contact. “Listen to what I say now, because it is the truth. Neither my sister
nor I are members of the Longflower family, however I cannot trust anyone at
this point to not assail me for something so petty as the alleged deeds of
another person if I was to give our surnames. Thank you for your kindness and
your help, but I must be on my way.” With that, he bowed his head to the altar,
turned around and strode out of the church. A look of recognition flashed
across the priest’s face as Patrick turned left and ambled aimlessly among the
streets, unsure what to do next. *** © 2013 The Creative DisasterAuthor's Note
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Added on August 22, 2013 Last Updated on August 22, 2013 Tags: inheritance, mystery, church, Patrick, escape AuthorThe Creative DisasterAboutHi! My name is George and I'm a high schooler with a love of writing, but then again pretty much everyone here has that love so I guess I better tell you something you don't know. What you probably do.. more..Writing
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