Hello God

My version of a short conversation with God

Hello God

 

Hello God, remember me?

Thanks for listening in.

I have so much to talk to you about,

I’m not quite sure how or where to begin…

 

 

I should start by saying I’m sorry,

I haven’t talked to you for so long.

It seems I always come running back,

When things in my life go wrong…

 

 

I’m always here child, you know that.

What bothers you today?

Take all the time you need with me,

For I want to hear what you have to say…

 

 

Everyday stress has brought me down.

I don’t know which way to turn.

I keep making very stupid mistakes.

When will I ever learn?

 

 

I try so hard to be a good parent;

To teach my kids what is right

But they always think they know more than me

And insist on putting up a fight.

 

 

I know exactly how you feel

My children do the same

I’ve given instructions on how they should act

Instead they take my name in vain…

 

 

Be patient with them, they will come around

Never shut your door

When they come back to your open arms

They will love you all the more

 

 

The bills are backing up, money is tight

I never seem to have enough

The latest new thing just came out on the market

But I’m still paying for all my other stuff…

 

 

Material possessions won’t make you happy

That has to come from within

Not living above what you can afford

Is the best way for you to begin…

 

 

Heaven holds the greatest treasures

You won’t find them on this earth

Follow my will and do unto others

That will give your life its worth…

 

 

I hear you God, and will try to heed

Everything that you say

I’ll do my best not to get down

Though I may stumble along the way…

 

 

I’ll be right here when you fall

To dust you off again

I know your future, as well as your past

And have no doubt

you will be tempted by sin…

 

 

One more thing, if you don’t mind

Before I let you go

I have a question about my life

That I would really like to know…

 

 

Is there someone in this world

For me to call my own?

Someone to share my life with me

I’m tired of being alone

 

 

I’d like to share moments of joy

And even burdens when there is pain

Someone to hold me close in his arms

And whisper, “I love you” and my name…

 

 

I’m asking you God if there’s a chance

I can be a part of two

Another half of a man that is whole

made for me, by you…

 

 

I hear your prayer, understand your desires

I feel the loneliness you carry inside

I’ve watched you weep in frustration and pain

And dried all those tears that you have cried…

 

 

There will be someone who will come along

He will love you more than you will know

He will accept and cherish you for who you are

He will encourage you to grow…

 

 

Love him back in much the same way

It is a simple plan

But if you follow it like I say

The love that grows will always stand…

 

 

Thank you God for loving me

And for listening again today

I’m glad I am a child of yours

And you love me in every way…

 

 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

So, you were talking to God last night--- I think
they call it Prayer and today you decided to write
it down, because it makes such good sense.
That`s what they call it you know, prayer.
You talk to God and sometimes He talks to you.
He will send the answer to your prayer, trouble is,
the answer will probably arrive long after you have
forgotten the prayer.
Beautiful poem. I love every word.
Thank you ! THIS SHOULD BE RATED 100 %
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Aries]

Wow...Beautiful. You have a real talent for expressing yourself in an open an honest way...Great Writing.

[Leah Elisabeth]

I really liked this a lot. I could tell it really came from the heart. Your honesty is very refreshing.