4:08

4:08

A Poem by Cre8tive

3:42- I checked my clock just to see

3:43- I looked at my phone, just to see

3:45- I impatiently waited just to see

3:48- Sitting here in my tears

3:50- I’m drowning

3:51- My phone rings; but I don’t answer

3:52- My misery is winning; I can’t see no end.. I don’t see a beginning

3:55- I  find some supplies because all of these lies must subside.

4:00- I have achieved my mission

4:03- Everything is set, My life is a wreck, I will lose all respect if I…..

4:04- I checked my clock just to see

4:05- I checked my phone just to see

4:08- I closed my eyes; just to see 

© 2012 Cre8tive


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Whoa...this is powerful and clever....has simplistic strength...clever...hauntingly good, and did I mention how clever this is? Truly unique.

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Added on November 5, 2012
Last Updated on November 5, 2012
Tags: Sad, Depression, Suicide Awareness

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Cre8tive
Cre8tive

Atlanta, GA



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20 Years Of Age. Really Big On Self-Expression. Lover Of Art. Junior In College, Majoring In Psychology. Work Part Time. Passion= Poetry, Photography, and Music more..

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A Poem by Cre8tive