Phantom Limb

Phantom Limb

A Poem by Jo R.
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Working through the letting go process of an important familial relationship

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You are the leg I lost, and

all the pain killers taken  

to  deaden the raw nerve endings

work . . .most of the time. 

I have prosthetic compensation

that  I keep having to learn

how to use  over and over

with each new terrain

carved out by the latest rejection.

I  have even learned how

to skip through the pool of tears

I cried yesterday, last week  or

a few minutes ago.

I have learned how to ignore the

incessant dull ache while not limping

and doing other distracting things.

I have discovered am valuable nonetheless

as so many assure me,  and I know how

to rest in Him gratefully.

But,

at the end of the day

I look down and mourn anew

Still, I have lost my leg.                        

 

10/27/16

© 2016 Jo R.


Author's Note

Jo R.
Been going back and forth with title and first line. The title now is the original, and I again went back to "the leg" from "a leg". I'd changed it after a review that assumed I had only one physical leg. Thoughts is the metaphore clear, or do I need to go to "Like a Phantom Leg" and/or "a leg". Or make the you stand out "YOU"? comments appreciated.

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the ache is still there...the missing limb itches the heart---

what once was there is not----

like in Ars Poetica---"like an empty doorway or a maple leaf"

heartache in a poem...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jo R.

8 Years Ago

Still there, and still there. Thanks for your words, Jacob!
You have put together a very powerful write here that I can relate to. Your comparison to losing a limb to a partner is most touching. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings as you moved on through this difficult time.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Jo R.

8 Years Ago

Thanks Dara, it is actually my daughter that the estrangement is about and indeed this has been a m.. read more
Dara

8 Years Ago

Yes, it can be awful. I have found that trying too hard to fix things only makes it worse as well. S.. read more
Jo R.

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words, Dara. Jo
You are my new hero. You are an inspiration. I have both my legs and still need him. I need him when my soul feels prosthetic. Thanks for sharing this. You lifted my day.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete

8 Years Ago

Sorry - your metaphor was written so well that I took it literally (I'm a little tired). My apologi.. read more
Jo R.

8 Years Ago

No problem, I just didn't want to be out there under false pretenses.... ;-)
Pete

8 Years Ago

My mistake. You did such a great job that I took the metaphor literally!

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Added on October 27, 2016
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A Poem by Jo R.