It's My Fault

I can feel my heart
Sinking to the ground
As if it is slowly melting
From my very own chest.

I suppose I was mean,
But I never know what to say.
You weren't supposed to leave.
And now I am full of regret.

Turn around.
Walk away.

Just tell me to go,
And don't turn back.

Author's Note

Please enjoy :)

Reviews

[CiNtsaLis]

simple &nd neat. *smiles* (: it's cute. I know the feeling.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you :)

[andrew mitchell]

Takes two to tango as they say but no real winners come from regret or loss or a bad decision. One learns to try to move on, forgive and forget!

[Cool Girl]

Haha very true! Thank you, Andrew!

[ANTO]

It is sad CG. Its sad when two people come to the end of their journey and one of those things we need to put down to experience. Blame only sours the good times like a cork in wine.
Your writing has come on big-time. Its still has that trademark CG honesty.
Its said that we should taste our words before we spit them out. Thats another thing we learn with experience.Good to se ya back CG !!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! Your reviews are just as wonderful as I remember! They never cease to make me smile :) Thank you again, my dearest friend. I hope to read some of your writing soon :)

[h d e rushin]

beautifully written Cool....there is temptation here, regret, self criticism, self questioning then
rationalization...


well written.....dana

[Cool Girl]

Thank you very much, my friend :)

[Willard Wells]

Error is love can leave a lonely heart and many questions "Cool". Well done.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you!

[luvs2write]

So I've felt something like this before, but I've never put it into such beautiful words. In fact, if this poem were translated into my own words it would probably go "I feel like crap so leave me alone. The world hates me." Anyway, yeah... I've lost a lot of friends and it always feels like my fault because I say or do the wrong thing. Anyway it's really late and son of a motherless duck I think I'm just trying to say good job. XD

[Cool Girl]

Lol thank you, Addie. Your words have enlightened me xD

[Lox]

Blaming each other is only a means of reverting ones anger on another person. Blaming should never be an option nor a choice, but when emotions erupt it cannot be helped.

An awesome piece as always. Keep at it! And if anything, its not your fault nor anybody's.

[Cool Girl]

Aww thanks :)

[wordman]

a sad write,and i doubt it was your fault,hard to control emotion

[Cool Girl]

Thank you, wordman :)