Open My Eyes

To Lizardo, my very best friend

Can you wake me up?
Can you open my eyes?
I want to know
How you feel inside.
Could you show me the world
And reach the stars in the sky?
Could you show me death,
Could you show me life?
Take me on an adventure
To the farthest of lands.
Take me to the edge
Of the desert hot sands.
Fly with me above the ocean,
Let me see the sky gleam.
Oh, open my eyes.
To see what you see.
For to you, the world is full
Of the most precious things.

Author's Note

Lizardo, I wish to see the world in the way you see it. You're amazing, and I am proud to call you my best friend :) Please enjoy!

Reviews

[Jon Roggie]

Lovely request. Such respect for another poet should be appreciated.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you very much :)

[Lizardo]

Aless this is the most beautiful thing someone has ever gifted to me! This is really an amazing poem, the opening lines reminded me of: Bombay's Bicycle club song, How can you swallow so much when you sleep?
This is such an amazing poem, I wonder why it doesn't have much views though... lol I have to go make you one right away! This poem gave me a happy feeling when I most needed it :) and for that, thank you so much Aless :) and I really liked the how much can you swallow while you sleep backtrack for the poem too!
I'm really thankful for this amazing poem Aless, this one great present :)
May God bless your for this amazing present when I needed it most, maybe there are also Angels who come to save us when we need it most :)

[Cool Girl]

Awww you're very welcome! I'm so glad you liked it! I actually got the idea from that song you talked about. That song always reminds me of you as does every Coldplay song I hear lol. Thank you so much for reviewing! And yes, maybe the here are angels who save us when we need it most. Thank you for being an amazing best friend. Take care, Lizzy. :)