Giving Up Love

A sad song about two people parting because they can't satisfy each other's needs..

I'm in love with you..

Don't you hate knowing that you love him and he loves you too.

But you can't give each other what you need,

And your heart's about to bleed.

No more sound..

Silent room,

Torn up sheets upon the ground.

You wanted to play hide and seek..

You the finder,
Me the hider,

But I hid to well..
And protected myself.

I gave you the key
To my heart
To my soul,

But that isn't what you need

You needed comfort,
Needed pleasure,
Don't you see?

I wanted sweetness,
Wanted kindness,
Not sexual desire.

I wish to hug you
And place kisses on your head,

But that leads to other things, I'd rather skip instead.

You are my world,
You are my life,
Come hear my plea.

Darling I'm in love with you and you love me.

I don't want to ever have to let you go.

You're my sweetheart,
You're my angel,
Don't you know?

But I'm incapable of giving what you need.
I just wish it didn't have to be this way

Because I'm begging now,
I'm begging on my knees.

Why can't God just make this easier for me?

Because I'm in love!

And I'm crying
Yes, I'm crying

I need you..

Won't you say,
oh won't you say you need me too

I think I'm dying here inside,
And we all know why.

Because we're parting,
Now it's time to say goodbye..

Author's Note

This isn't true..I just wrote it..

Reviews

[Elie Marie]

so sad and heartwrenching... but so good.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you :)

[Arline]

This is good :) Shows affection in sadness and desire. Definitely sadness though lol The party wants to make it work, but sadly doesn't. Great job!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks very much :)

[Sami Khalil]

"you are my world,
You are my life,
Come hear my plea.

Darling I'm in love with you and you love me.

I don't want to ever have to let you go."

This can be a sad song. Thank you for sharing...:)...................

[Cool Girl]

Thank you!

[Echoes of Eros]

Nothing is more beautiful and awakening than love, and nothing is more painful and aching as when love leaves us alone. This is so heartfelt. Truly thankful this isn't true for you. xo

[Cool Girl]

That is very very true. Thank you for stopping by!

[Echoes of Eros]

So glad I caught you. Will be sad if you're gone. xo

[Dani The Unreviewed]

This one is sad, well written. I can feel the feels in it. As for love...sexual desires are not love... Love does not necererly have to end up in sex... Nice write.

[Cool Girl]

Yes, I know! But some love so much that they have too many sexual desires... Thanks :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

We can partly blame it on the media...the movies identifying love with sex... Aint good. But i do know what you mean, i just wanted to establish a fair line between love, and sexual desires.

[Cool Girl]

Yes :) :) :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

:-) :-) :-) :-) lol

[jb]

Nice poetry for the imagination:)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you!

[jb]

Your welcome:)

[Emily]

I like the placing of the lines and stanzas, I think it creates more tension. Nice work!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks!!!!!!!

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome write cool girl! It's been forever since I've got a RR from you and I'm glad you sent it. I loved it :)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks, Aaron! Thanks for reading!! Take care :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A emotional ride in the poetry. You create need and desperation. I like the flow of thoughts that led to the sad ending. No ending is a good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! I'll see you around :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[KaoticOrder]

beautiful. You captured the emotions perfectly, it makes me reflect.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much