What Do I Do?

Every time I try to say hello,
It's just not the same.

I feel like I'm speaking Hawaiian
Where the word for bye and hello are the same.

I ask God,
Every day,
What to do.

What to do
Because I
Still love you

What do when you love somebody?

What do you when she doesn't love you, anymore?

What do you do when she is still your everything?

What do you do when you felt like you were King of the World?

She knows I love her!
She was my queen!

She was my angel,
My flower,
My life,
My universe..

My heart,
My soul,
My mind..

Though I can't tell her,
She has a boyfriend!

I want to tell her,
But i know it's wrong!

So what do you do when you love somebody?

What do you do when she doesn't need you, anymore?

What do you do when she knew everything about you?

What do you do when you needed her so you could live some more?

I can't explain it,
She was my baby.

We had everything in common I swear.

I can't explain it,
I really loved her,

Now she's off loving some other man.

And I'm left keeping all my feelings inside,
I keep asking myself all the time,

"Why did this happen, why? Why did this happen, why?"

Author's Note

I've been writing a lot these past few days...

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

you can feel the pain laced in your words throughout this write! IT is very powerful!
I love it! :)

[Cool Girl]

Thank You so much my friend! :)

[Not here]

i really like this :) great work and i can feel what you feel

[Cool Girl]

Thanks :) :)

[Maddy Stillman]

The emotion is clearly portrayed in this poem and I like how you didn't let too much excess language get in the way of your passion. Sometimes you don't need complex metaphors and intricate vocabulary words to emit your theme in an eloquent way. The part that really caught my attention was the second stanza:

I feel like I'm speaking Hawaiian
Where the word for bye and hello are the same.

I can't tell you how in love with that I am. Great work!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

[Heartful5160]

Wow!!! You let your emotions show in this poem and there is absoltley nothing wrong with that. Things like this happen a lot to girls and boys. It's love!! Sometimes it's something we can all be afraid of, but we still give it a try, right? Then we get that one person in our lives and then they walk away and well never know why, until you talk to them. Most times they don't want to talk, so like myself, you slip them a note or something like that to get their attention. Express to them how you feel about them. Let them know how you feel and you need to know how they feel about you as well, because you really don't need to leave each other out in the dark about the feelings. If the other person moves on, guess what? That means that's not the one God had planned to put in your life. God made a special person just for you and you'll know that person when he or she comes along, my friend. Great write and great job on showing and expressing your emotions on this write!!!!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much! I always enjoy your reviews :)

[Heartful5160]

Your welcome!!! I definalty love giving them lol!!! Just keep writing!!

[Heartful5160]

I'm working on some new work and I can't wait for you guys to check it out!!!1

[Cool Girl]

I'll be sure to once I have some time! I have 400 read requests to catch up on! Yikes lol :)

[Heartful5160]

Me too LOL!!

[Lizardo]

There a lot of sadness in this poem, I can feel it. Yet you want an answer to all that is happening...
and I can feel you on that one, we all want an answer to something understand how it happened.
Good poem

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! You're the best :)