It Hurts

It Hurts

A Story by Cool Girl
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You know it's true.

I know it's true.

I know that you know it's true,

And I know that you know that I know it's true.

But they don't know it's true.

I know that they don't know it's true,

And you know this.

You go around acting like it's fake.

But the thing is,

It hurts.

© 2015 Cool Girl


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Very nice cool girl. You have well penned and passed your message to the fake ones. God Bless :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
I'm sorry but this reminded me of Friends xD

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

It's okay! :) certain things remind me of friends too
Marcel Grant

9 Years Ago

No I mean the tv show ... xD Sorry, the whole, "They know you know" thing. :B
Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Ohhhhhh lol xD I can see why
It's not confusing at all.It's so very clear.Being fake is the new trend, they say.
But being hurt has always been a part of this trend too.Little did they realise this fact.
You can only pretend to stay strong even if you are bound by those adamantine chains.
Ummmm...still I would say "stay strong"
Anyway, a nice and hard-hitting thing to read.Keep writing:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
I don't want to say that I know how you feel, because I don't know the details of this...but I do know that this has to be one of the worst feelings in the world. I pretend that what my sister does doesn't bother me, I pretend that she's fine. She pretends that I don't know what she's doing...but we both know that the other is pretending. I'm sorry you have to be going through that. Fake people make me sick...
But from a writing pov, this was pretty amazing. =)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Cool Girl

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Addie. You're right, fake people are annoying, and they make me sick too. I wish you the bes.. read more
luvs2write

9 Years Ago

Thanks, and same to you. =)

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