Dear Soprano

More love...lol

Dearest soprano,
Way up high,

I listen to your sweet melody.

Breathtaking like an azure sky,
Weightless like a pure white feather,

How I dream of us together,
How I dream of being yours.

If only I could fly,
And soar the way you do.

But I am an alto,
Way down low,

My feet placed upon the ground.
Stuck
As you spread your beautiful wings.

My range not far enough
To match your flawless pitch

Though I know we are so different,
I believe that we can form a connection.

Just give me a note,
A tune,
Anything,
And I will sing the harmony.

Author's Note

Still trying to get back into my swing! :)

Reviews

[SydTheBug]

I love the flow of this poem. It has a wonderful rhyme scheme.

[Lizardo]

I really love this poem aless! the flow of it made me feel like I was flying over maple trees in canada xD
Awesome poem Aless, another great one from you :)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you :) :)

[closed]

this one seems to be about trying to connect to someone
i like the way you implement it

it conveys the sense of longing that only we artists could bring to form

it's kool to see what your old style was like


keep writing
as i know you will^


-Dream

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much. I know you will keep writing too :)

[Marcel Grant]

Adorable xD Nice to see something a little different and happy filled.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you, Marcel!!

[Tania]

Beautiful ! great job ... I enjoyed reading this - Beyourself

[Cool Girl]

Thanks!! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Creative write. I like it. Rating 100#

[Cool Girl]

Thank you :)

[Kami Grace]

It is an amazing piece! I really like how the scent of love pervades in your poem -- elegant, smooth and romantic. Very well-written! (Gotta read it again and again, it's really beautiful)

Kami

[Cool Girl]

Aww thanks so much! I really appreciate it!

[Kami Grace]

No problem! :)

[Archos]

I am only competent to say that I like it. It'll have to be enough :)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you :)

[luvs2write]

I love this!! It's like...music and writing and love...the best of all worlds!! =)
Two thumbs up...and if I had another hand, there would be three.

[Cool Girl]

Lol what about your big toe? Two thumbs and two big toes up! :P