Sweet Jealousy

Today, I saw that you two
Had been talking 'bout stuff.

The stuff I thought that you only told to me.

Today, I cried
Cuz I just don't feel special anymore.

Can't you hear my haunting plea?

I know you trust me,
And you trust him too.

But what about all the things we have been through?

So now I'm down on both my shaky knees

Singing sweet sweet jealousy.

Ohh sweet sweet jealousy

Today, I saw that you two
Had been hanging out awhile

I thought you only did that here with me.

Today, i thought
That I was your one true friend.

I guess there's something wrong with my brain.

I know you need me
But do you need him too?

Now, what about all the pain we have been through?

So now I'm giving up, you see?

Singing sweet sweet jealousy

You're my brother,
And I love you.

But can't you see I'm hurting?

So I'm giving myself to thee,

Oh darling, sweet sweet jealousy!

My darling, sweet sweet jealousy..

Author's Note

I have no idea...

Reviews

[erinwrites]

I can totally feel it! I've had a similar experience and i love this. Very well written

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much!!!

[Stephen]

Nice. I can feel the jealousy there. I can understand the jealousy in this context. You were able to describe the reason very well. Thanks for sharing.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you very much!

[weatherbee]

I really enjoyed this poem! I loved how honest it was! It really moved me. I was caught up in the emotion of it all. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing!

WB

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! I haven't seen you in a while! Hope all is well :)

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

This is great. I like how you made it like a song because you're singing sweet jealousy. I always love your straightforwardness in your poems. Its very refreshing. And the topic of this poem is great. We all feel jealous from time to time. Like someone is going to replace us and it sucks to feel replaceable. Great job. Stay inspired.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much! It makes me happy to know that you enjoy my poetry :)

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Your very welcome. It was my pleasure.

[Lizardo]

Well, It's time to go....
And I'll dream of making a escape...
Great poem by the way

[Cool Girl]

Thank you! :)

[Cool Girl]

What do you mean "time to go"? Are you running away?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Hey, i love you very much. You are my sister:) please, don't feel bad. You are very special to me, nobody can take that from you. You have a special place in my heart, so don't be jealouse. Wish i could do something to make you feel better. I love you.

[Cool Girl]

I know... I love you too :)

[Cool Girl]

It isn't your fault. Please please please open your profile back up? I'll close mine and never come back if you don't.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I'm sorry. But why would you be jealous? you are my beloved sister:) Nobody can replace you.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I wont close my profile... I'm here for you.

[Cool Girl]

Good :) :) :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

:-) i love you very much dear sister of mine:-)

[Cool Girl]

I know you do :)