Hello!

A poem about the first time we met...

Hey, I think you're pretty.
I think you're beautiful.

I've seen you around,
Helping out the world.

I think that you're lovely.
Honestly, my heart skips a beat.

Whenever I see you,
I have just one need.

To be with you
To hold you close

To love you forever eternity

I need you.
I want you.

So, I just wanted to say,
"Hello."

Hey, I think you're an angel.
I think you shine real bright.

You brighten up the darkness,
Even all through the night.

I think that you're a star.
I believe we are meant to be.

Together for life..
Don't you agree?

That we're perfect
That we're the same

That we are obviously soul mates

I need you.
I want you.

So, I just wanted to say,
"Hello."

Gosh, you are gorgeous.
Your smile is amazing.

Those braces of yours,
Make me want to do a double take.

When you're sad,
I'll go crying.

When you're happy,
I'll go flying.

And I'll stay with you
All along the way.

Hey, I think you're pretty.
I think you're beautiful.

I've seen you around,
Helping out the world.

I think that you're lovely.
Honestly, my heart skips a beat.

Whenever I see you,
I have just one need..

Hey, I think you're funny.
I think your humor's good.

You listen and understand
Just like I knew you would.

I think that your you're a Queen,
And together we shall rule.

If I let you go,
I'd be the biggest fool.

Your soul is beauty.
Your heart isn't small.

You're the best girl out of them all.

I need you.
I want you.

So, I just wanted to say,
"Hello."

Author's Note

This poem/song is about the first time I talked to the love of my life. I really hope that you enjoy reading it! Hopefully he enjoys reading it as well..

Reviews

[foufa la perle]

lovely! I love this one.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks!!!!!

[foufa la perle]

welcome !!!

[Lizardo]

This is such an awesome poem, just makes me say Aw xD
Another great poem CJ, specially the creativity to add the "Hello" there, made me think I was listening to a song
Anyways, great poem Aless, I really like it!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks, Lizardo! It's CG by the way xD

[Lizardo]

Damn it I missed xD

[Cool Girl]

Hahahaha xD

[closed]

This is the most creative most adorable poem you have written

I remember talking about all of this with you and cherish this initial moment between us

You are the sweetest^

And your pen knows no bounds

-My Queen of dreams^

[Cool Girl]

Aww thanks!!

I have always treasured our very first moments together :)

[closed]

Hello^_^

i love you

[Cool Girl]

Lol you're making me laugh

Hello, kind sir.

I am flattered :)

[closed]

i was rereading it
since it's one of my favorites of course^

[Cool Girl]

I keep rereading it as well..

It's a song and I have the first verse memorized!!!!

[closed]

oh wow
you do?

bet it would be fun to compose on piano

[Cool Girl]

I'm actually trying to write the notes for piano..

I have the tune and the lyrics..read moreI'm actually trying to write the notes for piano..

I have the tune and the lyrics..

I have the melody part for piano now,
I'm just trying to write the chords that accompany it

[closed]

that's awesome

i'll bet it'll be a great song musically as well as lyrically^

[Cool Girl]

Thanks :) im really trying hard!

[closed]

you are my gleaming star
you can make anything into gold^

[Cool Girl]

Well, you are my dream boy
And you sure know how to make a girl blush

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Nice! I think its very well written! Another great piece of your work.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are more than welcome:)

[Silent Scribe]

Its hard to read as a poem because of missing punctuation. other then that its a great poem/song. i do feel as if its missing something but it is about an actual event so that's just me.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you! I wrote it quickly, so I still need to edit it :)