Will You

Another love poem...

Will you love me
When I'm old
When there's wrinkles on my face
When my voice is no longer beautiful

Will you love me
When my sight starts getting bad
When my hearing starts to fade
When my hair starts turning gray

Will you still listen
To our favorite song
Sing it to me
As I try to sing along

Will you still listen
To my stories and tales
Or ask how my day went
Will you even really care

Tell me
Will you need me
Keep those promises
You made so long ago

Will you love me?

Will you comfort me
When I'm sad
When there's tears running down my cheeks
When I'm trembling from the fear inside

Will you comfort me
When I'm scared
When I cannot fall asleep
When i can only stare at the ceiling

Will you still see me
As an angel
Say it often
As I try to smile

Will you still see me
As someone beautiful
Kiss me gently
Will you even really mean it

Tell me
Will you want me
Hold me closely
And never let go

Will you love me?

Even if I do let go
And see the light way too soon
Or leave this world with you still left behind

I promise that I'm in your heart
I was there right from the start
And I'll watch over you

So when I pass
And go through those doors
Promise me that you'll make my story heard

Our love story shall be known worldwide
Legends to come
Showing love does not die

But only if you promise me
And answer my last question
I just really need to know

So tell me..

Will you love me?

Author's Note

I'm really happy to finally have this posted!
I've been working on it for weeks and just got done today! lol
I want to dedicate this one to the love of my life..
So to you, my love, I ask that simple question. Will you?

Reviews

[Gee]

Very nice write coolgirl,so many will be able to relate to this.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks, Gee!! Yes, love is a very relatable topic :)

[Gee]

You're welcome

[Kamari's]

This poem pulls at the heart strings. True love a endless journey with no match. Very well wrote cool girl. I see your form is admirable maybe I can take notes of it. I love the rhetorical questions in this give the real emotions to it. I feel a sense of yearning and wanting in it I truly admire this poem for it contains the feeling of live in it want the questions every lover wants to know.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much for the kind words, Kamari! I am so glad that you could truly feel the emotions of this piece. I am also so flattered that you enjoy my writing style and technique. I do wish you the best of luck with your pieces as well :)

[Kamari's]

Anytime dear writer and no flattery needed you have a lot of talent use it.

[Jamestown]

Well written piece that must have taken some thought, great questions
asked and flow was great! I think you will find that lovely person that
will do as you asked! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much, Jamestown! I hope you find that lovely person as well! :)

[One Lost Anti-Hero]

Wow the emotions put inside your poem is really nice and I love how you only describe the simple things that build a relationship. Overall I well written poem and I can tell this is something that you been trying to perfect. Really nice job.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much, Tony! :)

[closed]

I will always mi amore' ^

[Cool Girl]

:) thanks

Same to you!

[closed]

51 views already
Cool Girl top of the world!

lol ^

[Cool Girl]

Lol
I don't normally get so many views..
Maybe it's just a lucky night,
Or maybe someone sent read requests lol

[closed]

well it is in my favorites
it is my all time favorite poem ever^

[Cool Girl]

Aww thanks!

(hug)

I do appreciate it :)