Everlasting Love

A Valentine's Day poem..

I've long been lost in the curves of the waves
My soul trapped in the foam coming to shore
Back and up and back again
Until the day I was sad no more

Purest petals
Of the whitest rose
Crystal center
Thy diamond gold

Your angel wings swooped me up
And lifted me above the clouds
So I could see the world more clearly
As I looked deep deep down

My heart ebbs
With your complete flow
My whitest rose
Purest diamond

Your yellow halo brushed with gold
Lighting up the darkest night
Shining brighter than the giant sun
Saving us from all the frights

My crescent moon
Always shining
Be always near
For you are my sky

Wave your banner signs of peace
Hold them up while soaring by
Show them to the whole wide world
Let them see the message fly

Lifting my heart
Forever High

Guardian angel of mine
Oh how I love you so
Your heart loving, face so tender and sweet
How I mustn't let you go

And to all the other fish lost among the sea
Know that God will lead you home
Your angel too shall save you
From the vast waters you roam

Author's Note

The poems were originally separate (one by me and one by Literary Artist Dream), but I combined them to better display the love and emotions felt. I hope you enjoyed it!

Reviews

[Lizardo]

Man, It's been such a long time since I saw A REAL LOVE POEM xD
This poem is truely amazing, I could feel the sentiment of love jumping from one stanza to another.
Never felt happy reading a love poem actually (Except for that one time... yeah, but it all ended in a class fight, It's a long story xD) By the way: Book 2 is back.
God will lead you home.... Such a truthful line.
Maybe not now, we can't find love. But God already knows with who we are going to end up with, so it would be better a surprise. Like I said once: Better walk alone and let love surprise me, then try to find it in everycorner with empty hands.
We do roam in vast waters... but in those we meet new people.
I sincerly love the start of the poem, it really gives me a glimpse of what love might feel or be. (That is very good).
Like I said, Love dances around the poem with such heat like one of those Spanish Flamenco dances that I had to do once with my aunt xD Beautiful to read and watch.
Love is full of surprise, in every meter of life (Damn I hate that xD But I guess its better to feel surprise than expecting it)
My favorite love poem from you Aless, Amazing job from an Amazing writer (I saw that Literary Artist Dream Also did part of it, So I tell him that he did an awesome Job too!)
Damn, Amazing poem.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you, Lizardo! That's the longest comment I've ever read xD
I've missed you, hope all is well! Thanks again :)

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

And to all the other fish lost among the sea
Know that God will lead you home
You're angel too shall save you
From the vast waters you roam



Just pointing this out unless you meant
your are as in you're I believe you meant
your angel too shall save you.


You'r angel wings swooped me up
And lifted me above the clouds
So I could see the world more clearly
As I looked deep deep down



I believe you meant Your angel wings swooped me up.
as there is no comma's in Your but other then that this
was stunning and very easy to understand and
has a nice flow to it.


Thank you for sharing.



God bless. Benita

[Cool Girl]

Thanks for pointing that out! I'll fix it :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome thank you for sharing.

[Mary Bradley]

Powerful and heartfelt at the same time Cool Girl :-) ... magical portrayal of ever lasting love in the stormy sea we called our world . I can see a sliver of hope between the devastation around .
Thank you for sharing :-)

[Cool Girl]

thanks so much, Mary!
I'm glad you liked it :)

[closed]

Amazing
I like your version even better
Very creative angel

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much, dear:)

[Lavender Soya]

It's nice to read it the third time around and it has never failed to move me. Thank you for sharing your wonderful composition. I wish you well today and for the next days to come. :-)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so very much, my friend:)

[Lavender Soya]

My pleasure!